Now a PROMO not a DOCUMENTARY - changes to brief

I realise that my project has been heading in a slightly different direction since I started filming and working with the group. Below are my original Rationale, Context and Brief:

ORIGINAL

Rationale:
(Why are you doing it? How does it fit with your own sense of development? What is your particular interest in this area?)

I want to produce a documentary film in order to explore my interest in moving image that I developed at the end of last year. Technically it will also help to develop my camera, sound and editing skills. Finally it will be a different genre of moving image that I haven’t tried before that I can try my hand at.

Context:
(Where does the project fit in the real world?)

I will be producing the documentary film for the Sheffield Documentary Film Festival. This means that I have to keep it in mind that most of the people viewing the film won’t know about the existence of a fixed gear community in Leeds or possibly even what a fixed gear bike is.

Brief:
(What exactly are you/is somebody else expecting you to do?)

I will be creating a documentary film looking at the fixed gear bike scene/community in Leeds for the Sheffield Documentary Film Festival.

I need to clarify how my project has changed so that when it comes to my video being marked there isn't any confusion. As you can read above my original intention was to produce a DOCUMENTARY FILM about the fixed gear community in Leeds, that would be shown at the Sheffield Documentary Film Festival. This has now changed and instead I am producing a PROMOTIONAL VIDEO for the Fixed Gear Leeds Group. To Clarify I have rewritten my rational, context and brief below:

NEW

Rationale:
(Why are you doing it? How does it fit with your own sense of development? What is your particular interest in this area?)

I want to produce a promotional Video in order to explore my interest in moving image that I developed at the end of last year. Technically it will also help to develop my camera, sound and editing skills. Finally it will be a different genre of moving image that I haven’t tried before that I can try my hand at.

Context:
(Where does the project fit in the real world?)

I will be producing the promotional video for a group of fixed gear bike riders in Leeds called Fixed Gear Leeds. They will place the video on their website/blog. It will be seen by fellow fixed gear riders so I will be dealing with an audience who are familiar with the content and context of my video.

Brief:
(What exactly are you/is somebody else expecting you to do?)

I will be creating a Promotional Video for the group Fixed Gear Leeds.

Hopefully this has clarified things and not just gone and made things more complicated.